The World

Here's a song I wrote

I think she was lying.
But how can I be sure.
Not knowing is such a chore.
I feel like I'm flying.
But not in a good way though.

Soaring over the world.
My stomach is all twirled.
Not knowing where you are.
You're probably so far.

I wanted to see you.
But as the breeze blew,
You blew too,
You blew away.
Not here, but away.

I asked how you were.
All I got was an
"Uh, ok."
That's when I felt like

Soaring all over the world
My stomach is swirled.
Not knowing where you are.
You're probably far.
So, so far!

How hard would it be?
For you to just see?
That boy you're the one for me?
That we get along
Boy, please hear my song.

Soaring all over the world...
My stomach is swirled!
Oh what did I do?
I shouldn't have even asked you...
tonight.

Opinions

I'd work on the end rhyme a little bit in the first stanza, but overall it's amazing! I really like the chorus; much better than anything I could write.