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Coming and Going.
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Coming and Going.
"Good morning Katherine"
"And good morning Jasmine"
"Ok class!" Miss Riddickk said as she shut down the register. "We have been set a challenge!" she announced. "And she says it like a good thing" Nicole muttered under her breath to Erika. Sam heard and rolled his eyes. "I'm sure you're all eager to know what it is...SO I'LL TELL YOU!" Miss Riddick looked like she was going to burst with excitement. "SPIT IT OUT!" David jeered and everyone laughed. Their teacher blushed but carried on as if nothing had happened. "EXCHANGE STUDENTS!" she yelled and ran out the room. Everyone suspected it was to splash her face, so it was no suprise to them that when they came back in her face was dripping with water when she came back to the class to 'restore order'. (As if!) Uh-oh...Miss Riddick had 'the look' SMACKED onto her face as they called it. They all moved their chairs back a few paces. Except one. Ivana. "Ivana!" Miss Riddick cried. "Thank you for volunteering to be exchange student!" She grinned happily. "Aw nuts" Ivana sighed. The bell rang and they all ran for their lives out the class, especially Kate because Brandon had farted (who sat next to her.) Miss Riddick gasped for air and made the maddest mad dash for the staffroom than any teacher who need air before.
"Pfft!" Imogen said. "Exchange students? As far as we know we'll get some mad pedo." Katherine passed the ball back to Imogen. "Yeah, well it might not be that bad. I mean, poor Ivana. She's getting sent to Greece through no fault of her own." She sympathised.
"So, an exchange student?" Josh chortled. "Wonder what they'll be like...hopefully a hot girl, eh?" he nudged Jordan. He smiled and wondered. He wondered so much that he missed Katie's shot so the girl's team scored. "Yay!" they cheered. The boys groaned.
DRING! The bell rang for class. Were things about to get better or worse?
So what do you think so far? Comments appreciated
-Taylaa.
Re: Coming and Going.
WRITE MOAR PL0X
Very good, but make the chapters longer xD
And write me more into it (joking... unless you really want to )
Very good, but make the chapters longer xD
And write me more into it (joking... unless you really want to )
Re: Coming and Going.
xRedRockerx wrote:WRITE MOAR PL0X
Very good, but make the chapters longer xD
And write me more into it (joking... unless you really want to )
You are in it o.O...Katherine
Re: Coming and Going.
LMAO xD You are in there as Katherine
I like it so far. Will you make some efforts on making chapters longer? I really want to know what's going to happen x]
I like it so far. Will you make some efforts on making chapters longer? I really want to know what's going to happen x]
Cookie'D- Exotic Greek Maiden
- Age : 26
Location : Purple House, Square Office
Number of posts : 1296
Tracker Points : 5638
Registration date : 2009-07-28
Re: Coming and Going.
Here is the seating plan XD
Jordan - Katherine
Lina - Tobias
Brandon - Kate
Josh - Jasmine
Erika - Nicole
David - Jake
Katie - Imogen
Ivana - Yasmine
Jordan - Katherine
Lina - Tobias
Brandon - Kate
Josh - Jasmine
Erika - Nicole
David - Jake
Katie - Imogen
Ivana - Yasmine
Re: Coming and Going.
AWESOME.
keep postting, its interesting.
keep postting, its interesting.
ivanaaa- Amature Tracker
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Tracker Points : 5235
Registration date : 2010-02-07
Chapter 2
There was a monumental clanging and bashing of tables and chairs. Chattering and gossip about life in general...SILENCE. Everyone's head
turned to face the door. "Class!" Miss Riddick announced. "This is Lina Evans." Lina gave a little wave and grinned. The class smiled back, but
one boy in paticular did. "Jordan!" Miss Riddick cried. She clapped her hands in front of his face. "Uh, what?" he mumbled. Everyone laughed
but Lina blushed. "Lina, please take a seat next to Tobias" Josh groaned and Miss Riddick glared at him. He sludged down further in his seat.
"AWW MISS!" David ridiculed. "HOW COME TOBIAS GETS TO SIT BY HER?" She giggled cutely, but as she walked past to get to her seat
Nicole whispered "He's being stupid!" Lina tried to smile at her, but couldn't help feeling a little hurt by her remark. I mean, David wouldn't
be that mean, would he? She took her seat next to Tobias and opened up her textbook...
I PROMISE there will be more in the next chapter. I guess I just couldn't write much more about it, really.
Re: Coming and Going.
Hey... I'm the new girl.
And Jordan, I didn't tell her to do something like that. So don't you all go and make some gossip. Seriously.
And Jordan, I didn't tell her to do something like that. So don't you all go and make some gossip. Seriously.
Cookie'D- Exotic Greek Maiden
- Age : 26
Location : Purple House, Square Office
Number of posts : 1296
Tracker Points : 5638
Registration date : 2009-07-28
Re: Coming and Going.
I think I should be in it more
Clorettah- Amature Tracker
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Location : England =]
Number of posts : 75
Tracker Points : 5463
Registration date : 2009-07-31
Chapter 3
Lina strolled out the door and was greeted by a huddle of girls. "Heyyyy Lina!" Katie beamed. "Oh, hi..." Lina replied nervously. "...Katie" she
grinned. They started to walk downstairs, and out into the playground. "So...what do you think of Miss Riddick and the class so far?"
Katherine asked, eager to make small talk...and friends. "Oh, pretty cool" chuckled Lina as she bit into her apple. A ball rolled up to Lina's
foot. "Sorry" A boy blushed. It was that guy from this morning...Jordan! "It's ok" she assured him. He dribbled the ball back to David and
his friends. They scored because Kate was filing her nails instead of being goalkeeper. The boys cheered. The girls moaned and shouted
at Kate. "6 DINNERS!" bawled the dinner lady. Like a heard of wild bulls, the class all rushed to be first in line. Katie and Katherine all
bolted to sit next to Lina but Jasmine and Erika got in there first. For the rest of lunch Katie and Katherine gave them dagger eyes, but when
ever Lina looked they turned it into a sweet smile. "LINA!" Imogen and David cried at the same time as she ran outside after lunch. "Want
to play football?" David gleamed. "NO! She's playing tig with us!" Imogen said sternly. The bell rang. "Saved by the bell" Murmured Lina
as she ran off to join the line.
Btw, i dont CARE that the chapters are short. I'm going to write lots of short chapters
Re: Coming and Going.
Seriously,how did you write that all today? had you already wrote it, and just copied and pasted?
Re: Coming and Going.
I have a lot of free timeAcdog wrote:um. How dd you write all of that TODAY? jeez your speedy....
Anyways, ONTO THE STORY.
"Alright class!" Miss Riddick clapped her hands to get the class's attention. "In two days will be the PROM!" There was a massive palava of
talking and tittering about who they were going to go with, what they're going to wear and how much would a pink super-stretch limo/a dark
blue monster truck with fire spray-painted on the side cost? "But first, you must find dates! So, if we could all just-" their teacher started.
They all got up and rushed over to people they wanted to go with. David and Jasmine, Josh and Katie were just some who did. Everyone were
had their dates, apart from two. Lina and Jordan were left sitting at their desks, stunned by everything that had just happened. "Well..."
Miss Riddick said to the two of them. "How about you two go together then?" "I'd like that." Jordan smiled at Lina. She flushed bright red
and cracked open her notepad, trying to decide what she would wear.
Re: Coming and Going.
You'll know in the next chapter, child.xRedRockerx wrote:OOH OOH OOH! Who do I get to go with? =]
Re: Coming and Going.
This like gives meh an idea for the next story I'm gonna write. But I dont want to copy yewwwwwwwww! D:
Re: Coming and Going.
Still writing the 6th chapter,Acdog wrote:I'm still not in it. =[
Edit : Here it is now!
DING-DONG! Yasmine opened the door to her house. "Heya!" she yelled as 6 girls all flooded into her house. She hugged them all in turn as
they came in through the door. "Come on up to my room!" she grinned. They all hustled and bustled their way up Yasmine's narrow, powder
blue stairs into her metallic purple coloured room. She had set out a dressing table, 3 mirrors and 3 stools. "We will take it in turns to do our
make-up!" she giggled. Katherine cracked open her compact mirror. "Right, who wants blusher?" she cried.
KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCK! Jake opened the door. "What's up guys?" he said and patted the 5 boys who ran into Jake's house like a bunch of
4 yr olds just let into the sweet shop with £1,00000000000000000000000.99 to spend. The boys had not even got halfway up the stairs
when they heard the music blasting from his room. Some of their favourite songs! Paramore, Green Day, Queen, Breaking Benjamin, Three
Days Grace! They all rocked out while they changed clothes.
"Wow, Kate! You look great!" Lina judged. Kate had a shiny, blue dress with sequins round the neck. "Thanks" she blushed. Katherine and
Imogen walked into the room at the same time, with Imogen in a red, satin silver sequined dress, and Katherine in a black, satin gold sequined
dress. They laughed and hugged as they twirled and high-fived each other. Then Lina appeared in her dark green prom dress. She gave a spin
everyone laughed. "Woot!" Jasmine shouted "Jordan will love this!"
"Girls!" a voice called up the stairs. It was Yasmine's mom, Rebecca. "The white super-stretch limo is here!" They all practically had a mini-
cat fight down the stairs! As they clambered into the limo, Nicole and Erika pulled out a game. "Let's play truth or dare!" they exclaimed.
Johnny appeared in a smooth white shirt, with a black waistcoat, cool brown trousers and black converses. "Lookin smooth Johnny!" Tobias
chortled. Then David entered the room with a classic black tuxedo. Everyone laughed and David blushed. "Guys!" Mike, Jake's brother yelled.
"Your black limo is here" "WOOT WOOT" they all shouted and pushed their way down the stairs. They had a SingStar game on it and
Brandon and Josh were singing Summer Loving (if you can even imagine that!).
"WE'RE HERE!"...
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