Tomorrow Never Knows

here is a story i wrote while in school. Warning, is weird and avante garde. Also abstract art form of writing


And in the end he cried. The mind flowed downwards in the stream of water, and he didn't hear what she was saying. ''Are you listening to me???'', Nicole sternly asked. Cody looked up in a confused state, ''DID YOU HEAR WHAT I SAID!?''. screamed nicole ''No, i was busy thinking..'' calmly responded Cody. Nicole then abruptly left the room asking herself questions such as ''Why did i marry him!'' and ''HES NOT EVEN GOOD IN BED!''. Cody got out of bed and put his clothes back on and very angerly said under his breath ''..this isnt good..'',and he left with his mind wandering;thinking of a poem in his head:

Let your life run free
it isnt dying
it isnt dying
Your life should know you knew the way
it isnt dying
it isnt dying
Tomorrow knows you made it good
So make it know you love it too
It isnt dying
It isnt dying
Within you without you make pay
Say you love it
and it shall go away
Say you shall love it do
And it will stay
And in the end
you shall always stay

Cody was not a brilliant poet, but he still made lots of money when people came to hear his words. Cody entered the room Nicole was in, and he sat. He sat for a long time staring at the blank white wall, and saw Nicole had left. He went to the next room, and sat there staring at the green tangerine wall, and then got out his quitar and sang a song, and he then saw Nicole standing there. ''and now..'' nicole said suddenly, ''we shall being'' said Cody, and they fell.

Carder ran into the road across from Abbey Street. He had barely made it away from the mad men. ''what a stroke of luck!'' profoundly remarked Carder, ''they almost had me!''. Then David appeared with Sam, and they attacked him with sticks of glory. Carder fell.


All this turmoil of confusion set off Jordan, who watched from the trees, so he sang:

We were talking about the space between us all
And the people who hide themselves behind a wall of illusion
Never glimpse the truth then it's far too late when they pass away.
We were talking about the love we all could share when we find it
To try our best to hold it there with our love
With our love we could save the world if they only knew.
Try to realize it's all within yourself
No-one else can make you change
And to see you're really only very small,
And life flows ON within you and without you.
We were talking about the love that's gone so cold and the people,
Who gain the world and lose their soul
They don't know they can't see are you one of them?
When you've seen beyond yourself then you may find, peace of mind,
Is waiting there
And the time will come when you see
we're all one, and life flows on within you and without you.

They all heard him. And cody remarked a sudden, incomprehensable word. And in the end. he cried.

I like it alot.

That must have taken a while to write. well done!

-KTP123

why thank you and no it didnt take a long time, it took only 5 minutes I am good at writing these things while listening to beatles songs

Umm..its good. But I think I'd understand the meaning better if I was high...XD

yea, also check out my new Advent Garde, abstract, art-like audio compliation! I cannot post it here but its going to be on the Artistic Arctic thread.

Very...strange, arma. But nice story nonetheless.

You should take this story and read it to your therapist. xD