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A Valentine's Day Story
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A Valentine's Day Story
Hey guys! This is just a story that I wrote for my homework. I decided that the TRT people will be the characters since it would be lame to invent names. Anyway, read on! Also, if you notice that there are caps on some other words, that's because our lesson is Word Multiple Meanings so don't mind that lol XD
One day, as David walked into the kitchen, he saw his brother smirking at him.
"What's with the smirk, brother?" David asked.
"It's Cody. And..." he continued to smirk.
"What?" David asked him again.
"You delivered some flowers. He's at the door."
"Oh right!" David ran into the door and opened it. There, he saw the delivery guy.
"Thanks and here's the TIP!" David gave him some money and asked "What's your name by the way?"
"BM..." the delivery guy said, looking at him very anxiously.
"Err, one TIP. Don't LOOK at customers like that or they'll freak out." David took the flowers and hurriedly went into his room. He got a paper and wrote a NOTE. Then, placed the note into his pocket until his brother busted into the door.
"TO WHOM WILL YOU GIVE THE FLOWERS TO????" Cody sang into a very high NOTE.
"Stop singing and its for Nicole!" David yelled. He placed the flowers into his bag and changed his shirt into a red shirt. "Anyway, I have to go and see Andrew and Tobias. Bye!" David ran to the door, took his bike and went to the PARK to see his bestfriends, Andrew and Tobias.
"Hey Andrew, Tobias...Carder?" David's friends looked at their backs and saw Carder, looking at them.
"Geoff Carder, what are you doing here and why did you PARK your bike near Mcdonald's?" Tobias asked him, pointing to the area of Carder's bike.
"That's because I ordered a sundae?" Carder said, getting near them. "Anyway, I have to tell you something, David."
"What are you gonna tell him? The DATE today? Well, its Febuary 14!" Andrew rolled his eyes. David nudged Andrew's shoulder with a just-lay-low LOOK.
"David, Nicole's at your back." Carder said. David looked back and saw Nicole wearing a cute little dress with flowers on it.
"Nicole!" David gasped.
"Wow." Andrew and Tobias said, stunned at Nicole's beauty.
"Hello, David." Nicole smiled at him. "Andrew, Tobias, Carder." Then, she nodded at David's friends.
"You look like a fairy godmother!" Tobias exclaimed.
"Geez..." Andrew and Carder said.
"Nicole," David began. He opened his bag and got the flowers and got the note from his pocket. "This is for you."
"Thanks!" Nicole smiled to David and he smiled back. Then, she read the note out loud. "Dear Nicole, Happy Valentine's day! That's all that I can say, but this is not all that I can do. I would do everything for you! I hope you like my extra gift! David." She looked at David and asked, "What extra gift?"
"Here." David got something out from his pocket and gave Nicole a little fairy godmother figurine. "Well, Tobias said that you looked like a fairy godmother, but a beautiful one."
"Thanks!" Nicole blushed and hugged David. David smiled and hugged her back.
"I wish I had a DATE..."Andrew, Tobias and Carder said althogether. After, they hugged each other, crying.
"Can I join?" BM, the delivery guy, suddenly appeared. The three boys looked at each other and finally said, "Sure!"
A VALENTINE'S DAY STORY
by Lynx43
by Lynx43
One day, as David walked into the kitchen, he saw his brother smirking at him.
"What's with the smirk, brother?" David asked.
"It's Cody. And..." he continued to smirk.
"What?" David asked him again.
"You delivered some flowers. He's at the door."
"Oh right!" David ran into the door and opened it. There, he saw the delivery guy.
"Thanks and here's the TIP!" David gave him some money and asked "What's your name by the way?"
"BM..." the delivery guy said, looking at him very anxiously.
"Err, one TIP. Don't LOOK at customers like that or they'll freak out." David took the flowers and hurriedly went into his room. He got a paper and wrote a NOTE. Then, placed the note into his pocket until his brother busted into the door.
"TO WHOM WILL YOU GIVE THE FLOWERS TO????" Cody sang into a very high NOTE.
"Stop singing and its for Nicole!" David yelled. He placed the flowers into his bag and changed his shirt into a red shirt. "Anyway, I have to go and see Andrew and Tobias. Bye!" David ran to the door, took his bike and went to the PARK to see his bestfriends, Andrew and Tobias.
"Hey Andrew, Tobias...Carder?" David's friends looked at their backs and saw Carder, looking at them.
"Geoff Carder, what are you doing here and why did you PARK your bike near Mcdonald's?" Tobias asked him, pointing to the area of Carder's bike.
"That's because I ordered a sundae?" Carder said, getting near them. "Anyway, I have to tell you something, David."
"What are you gonna tell him? The DATE today? Well, its Febuary 14!" Andrew rolled his eyes. David nudged Andrew's shoulder with a just-lay-low LOOK.
"David, Nicole's at your back." Carder said. David looked back and saw Nicole wearing a cute little dress with flowers on it.
"Nicole!" David gasped.
"Wow." Andrew and Tobias said, stunned at Nicole's beauty.
"Hello, David." Nicole smiled at him. "Andrew, Tobias, Carder." Then, she nodded at David's friends.
"You look like a fairy godmother!" Tobias exclaimed.
"Geez..." Andrew and Carder said.
"Nicole," David began. He opened his bag and got the flowers and got the note from his pocket. "This is for you."
"Thanks!" Nicole smiled to David and he smiled back. Then, she read the note out loud. "Dear Nicole, Happy Valentine's day! That's all that I can say, but this is not all that I can do. I would do everything for you! I hope you like my extra gift! David." She looked at David and asked, "What extra gift?"
"Here." David got something out from his pocket and gave Nicole a little fairy godmother figurine. "Well, Tobias said that you looked like a fairy godmother, but a beautiful one."
"Thanks!" Nicole blushed and hugged David. David smiled and hugged her back.
"I wish I had a DATE..."Andrew, Tobias and Carder said althogether. After, they hugged each other, crying.
"Can I join?" BM, the delivery guy, suddenly appeared. The three boys looked at each other and finally said, "Sure!"
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Re: A Valentine's Day Story
I like your story, it's very long and lovely O.O
ExiledSinJnr- The Exiled Sin
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Re: A Valentine's Day Story
That was AWESOME. 'Nuff said.
P.S: I so own in that thing.
P.S.S: Can i do one of these?
P.S.S.S: Your signature creeps me out.
(I am the kid known as Tobias, By the way, people.)
P.S: I so own in that thing.
P.S.S: Can i do one of these?
P.S.S.S: Your signature creeps me out.
(I am the kid known as Tobias, By the way, people.)
Last edited by Cowzrock on Fri Jan 30, 2009 9:01 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: A Valentine's Day Story
Thanks guys! I hope my teacher likes it 0.0
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Re: A Valentine's Day Story
Thanks people!!
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Re: A Valentine's Day Story
I might make a sequel...but not valentine's day i think.
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