My First Short story

I wrote this from 2 am til 4:30 am this morning
But my first good short story but i think my last
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It was 2 in the morning Young adult Jake partied hard one night with his friends. Then there was a girl that caught his eye a 25 year old blonde with a slender frame. He approached her and put on his charm. Jake learned her name it was Kati they got along and exchanged numbers. Shortly after, the party died down. Kati asked Jake if she could “crash” at his place. Jake seeing this as an opportunity gladly takes Kati to his apartment.
They both agree it would be better to drive the back roads. Swerving several times they make it about 5 miles away from Jakes house. They pass this one patch of dense woods that is giving a soft, eerie, yellow glow. Jake turns the car around to investigate. As he approached the light he could hear this faintly audible hum. He walked into this dome surrounding it, which also appears to be the source of the eerie glow, upon entering the dome the faint hum turns into a piercing screech. Then small, flashing blue lights seemed to swim through Jakes brain, and they seemed to blink like the flashing light of an ambulance. Immediately there is this overpowering sulfur smell. He collapses. Kati jumps out of the car but two humanoid figures drag him off further into the light. Terrified she runs as far away as she can.
The next morning Jake wakes up in his bed with a hangover. He thinks to himself about what he thought happened. He goes to the window and to his astonishment his car is right where it belongs. Then POW! His arm felt like it just got stabbed, but there are three little black balls slightly smaller than a BB pellet in a triangular formation. There aren’t any cuts so he is baffled on how it got there. Before he could ponder the subject further his hangover kicked back in, so he just went back to bed. Two days later the Blackballs came out and they had a chip attached to it. Jakes doorbell rang he answered. There were two men approximately 5’6 dressed all in black with pale skin and no hair they said that he participated in a study ran by the Ohio Board of Blood Analysis and they inserted a chip to see the effects alcohol had on the blood flow and red blood cell count. They firmly asked for the chip back, so I gave it to them, and they drove away in their black car

good story =D