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Post by Vicsp on Tue Aug 04, 2009 2:47 am

A definition, friends, of stress:
Your own reaction to a mess
Stresses may be large or small
Sometimes they're not perceived at all
Examples: Say a lack of cash;
A just-avoided freeway crash;
An allergen that's in the air;
The barber says you're losing hair;
Fifty on a spavined horse;
Attorney's letter re divorce;
Wetness, dryness, heat or cold;
Callow youth or getting old
Stress from pains to pleasures range
The common element is change
Adapt or die, and that's a fact
And so our bodies must react:
The heart speeds up, the gut slows down
Facial muscles snarl or frown
Bronchial tubes expand and then
The blood absorbs more oxygen
Widened pupils search the void
Adrenal glands secrete steroid
Serum glucose starts to climb
More insulin works overtime
Stressed physically or mentally
Muscles tense to fight or flee
The midbrain boils with rage and fear
While cortex plans to save your rear
The point is, stress is not unique
It doesn't mean you're dumb or weak
A part of mankind's constitution
Bequeathed to us by evolution
Common both to man and beast
It proves you're still alive, at least.


This poem was not Created by Vicky. ~BM
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Post by -Lynx__ on Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:31 am

Umm...so like, I didn't really get the point of the poem and at the mid-end part it didn't really seem to get related to the main subject. You know, something like randomness? I'd rate it 6/10 at least :]
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Post by Bananaman on Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:02 am

I don't think you made this poem, it doesn't have your Grammar and spelling. Plagarism. o I give it a 2/10
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Post by -Lynx__ on Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:11 am

=O umm...

http://xnet.kp.org/permanentejournal/Fall01/stress.html

I think I'd have to agree with BM...sorry accidentally found this on the net in google when i was searching for poems....
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Post by Bananaman on Tue Aug 04, 2009 12:40 pm

-Lynx__ wrote:=O umm...

http://xnet.kp.org/permanentejournal/Fall01/stress.html

I think I'd have to agree with BM...sorry accidentally found this on the net in google when i was searching for poems....

Yeah.. Vicky don't try and pass things off as your own work Razz
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Post by Armageddon on Tue Aug 04, 2009 12:46 pm

Did she say it was her own work? o.0
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Post by Vicsp on Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:25 pm

HINT HINT

its only a pome .

i never said i was the writer
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Post by Cookie'D on Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:29 pm

Yea...well, even if it's not yours, I wouldn't rate it much. I don 't get much of this, and BELIEVE me, even though I might be random on the chat, I read a lot of poems, and I didn 't like this one much. I didn 't get the point, actually. The...INSIDE of it. Lol
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Post by Acdog on Tue Aug 04, 2009 4:56 pm

Plagerism kinda sux..and I don't really get the poem.
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Post by Bananaman on Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:08 pm

Vicsp wrote:HINT HINT

its only a pome .

i never said i was the writer

Well in that case, Vicky. You dont post a Poem out of Random. You have to Write at the bottom who wrote the Poem. Otherwise it's Illegal Razz
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Post by Acdog on Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:26 pm

Bananaman wrote:
Vicsp wrote:HINT HINT

its only a pome .

i never said i was the writer

Well in that case, Vicky. You dont post a Poem out of Random. You have to Write at the bottom who wrote the Poem. Otherwise it's Illegal Razz

=O REALLY?! I thought it was only illegal if you claim that YOU made it,not if you post it without saying who made it..woh. O.O
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Post by -Lynx__ on Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:21 pm

Acdog wrote:
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Vicsp wrote:HINT HINT

its only a pome .

i never said i was the writer

Well in that case, Vicky. You dont post a Poem out of Random. You have to Write at the bottom who wrote the Poem. Otherwise it's Illegal Razz

=O REALLY?! I thought it was only illegal if you claim that YOU made it,not if you post it without saying who made it..woh. O.O

If you don't write the name of the author below (or above, just below the title), people will think that its yours and so its still plagiarism
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